is is philosophy, is attempt, are mediocre
Try using a diff background track, longer track, perhaps on the Enya route, or Yanni, best I can think of is Kitaro, like his real long japanese drum solo, Blue Man Group would fit this real well too.
Work on the rythm a little too, the pause in the random loop is a little distracting, with a slightly slower pace and even rythm with a different background track you would have the beginnings of a marketable meditation peice.
Also I love the realistic clouds in the background, but mine went pixelized as soon as the animation started, not sure if it was supposed to. Also the loop on the clouds would be cooler if it was continuous, or like a 3 minute loop so you didn't notice the constant change.
Like I said though, this is a marketable design. I know of several Zen Buddist that have tapes with mantras very similar. You get the design down and you have a cash opportunity here