Zadock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Big Breast Sandwich]

carl's isn't nationwide

next spoof you do, you may want to pick one that people can get. If you have never been to the west coast you have no I dea what a Carl's is and you are wondering why they are using the Hardees star.

Of course I would love to see Karl's "taco"

[o fortuna]

its there

unlike a lot of the crap out here you were able to correctly portray the tension in the movie, there was a little lag in the very begginning, I don't know how you would intensify that, so I say keep it as is, very good

[Hilarious Eminem Jive]

too funny

this was good. very funny

[Dumb Fawk #1]

Very British

could have used a little polishing, looking out for the sequel, I would like to see the bunny eat the muffin.

[Counter-stick]

too funny

Your knack for storytelling rocks, now get a team for the animation and voice over and kick some tail. It's very rare that I actually laugh at one of these, but you got a chuckle from me. Rock on, keep practicing

[American OnlineCommerical]

Mediocre flash, but funny

As usual the flash is poorly drawn, as is 80% of what makes it out here, but there was a good concept there. Learn to draw and keep the humor and you'll be doing some kick tail work.

Slow down the text a little, not enough time to read everything you put in.

Start the image at the same time as the audio, I have my speakers off untill i see something on the screen. Therefore I lost the beginning.

Like I said good concept, and you animation is on par with most of the users out here, but most of the people out here need to learn to draw as well. And you are far supior to the idiot that think moving still images are worth submitting.

[is]

is philosophy, is attempt, are mediocre

Try using a diff background track, longer track, perhaps on the Enya route, or Yanni, best I can think of is Kitaro, like his real long japanese drum solo, Blue Man Group would fit this real well too.

Work on the rythm a little too, the pause in the random loop is a little distracting, with a slightly slower pace and even rythm with a different background track you would have the beginnings of a marketable meditation peice.

Also I love the realistic clouds in the background, but mine went pixelized as soon as the animation started, not sure if it was supposed to. Also the loop on the clouds would be cooler if it was continuous, or like a 3 minute loop so you didn't notice the constant change.

Like I said though, this is a marketable design. I know of several Zen Buddist that have tapes with mantras very similar. You get the design down and you have a cash opportunity here

rootdown responds:

thank you. this is what i call a review. ill try out your tips.